Sunday, November 21, 2010

Sudden Fiction: Draft 1

A girl named Annette walked into the café hoping to meet that john fella from facebook. They started talking the night before. He could be the potential husband, the sweet loving guy that gives her compliments and makes her feel special. He could be the love of her life and to think the internet brought us together.
Oh my god where could he be. He said to get here at 2 and its 2:05. What if he stood me up, I knew that just because he called me the most beautiful girl in the world that I shouldn’t have believed it. Annette paced around the café thinking the worst, but then a stranger came and tapped her on the shoulders. It was no stranger it was…..
“John! for a second there I thought you stood me up.” Annette said with a smile.
“No, why would I do that, I told you your body is bodacious you are so beautiful. I would be a fool to stand you up.” John said with a smirk.
“He He, I think that we would make a great couple.”
“Yea we would, with you by my side we could run this town, your beautiful smile, your captivating eyes.” John said.
“Awe Hun, I think I may love you.” Annette said.
“I Love you too and to think I just started talking to you last night and my dreams arte coming true today.”
“Do you want to go back to my place and talk things over and set the wedding date?” Annette said happily.
“Yeah let’s go talk things over.” John said as they walked to Annette house.
“I was a virgin, I'm so glad I lost it to you” Annette said
“I'm glad too.”
“I don’t feel so good Hun”
“Take some Advil honey”
“I'm pregnant babe.”
“Well that’s not really my problem.”
“Is that all you can say.”
“Well your telling me that your pregnant and I really don’t see how that’s my problem. How do I even know that its mine?”
“Babe are you serious you said that you loved me.”
“Well that was before you got knocked up. Your body is not going to be toned after this you’re going to walk around for 9 months looking like a whale.”
“No John I love you”
“Bye Annette, I don’t love you anymore. I lusted for you and you misinterpreted that for love.”
“No john I know you love me.”
“You thought wrong. BYE Annette.”

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